Prose Posse:
Picture Book Critique Group

Polish Your Children's Picture Book Stories with Expert Feedback and Community Support
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Join the Fall 2025 Picture Book Critique Group, where aspiring children's authors flourish. Write better, together!

Why Join the Prose Posse Picture Book Critique Group?
Writing picture books can feel isolating - but it doesn’t have to be. The Prose Posse Picture Book Critique Group connects you with passionate children’s writers who understand your journey and share your creative goals.
This inclusive, judgment-free community gives you the support you need to share your work with confidence and grow as a writer.
Expert Guidance for Picture Book Success
As an 8-time published children's book author, I provide direct feedback, industry insights, and proven strategies during each session. You'll receive personalized guidance that goes beyond peer support - learning what agents, editors, and publishers actually look for in picture book manuscripts.
Together with your fellow critique group members, you'll celebrate what's working in your stories, identify specific areas for improvement, and develop the skills to craft picture books that truly connect with young readers. This combination of professional mentorship and peer collaboration creates the perfect environment for growth.

Picture Book Critique Group Membership Details
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How It Works:
The Prose Posse Picture Book Critique Group meets weekly on Zoom for 60-90 minutes, depending on group size and critique needs.
Sessions take place every Wednesday.
Choose the time that works best for you:
- Morning session: 10:00am PT / 1:00pm ET
- Afternoon session: 5:30pm PTÂ / 8:30pm ET
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Investment: $250/month (4 sessions included).
Next Session Begins in the fall of 2025.
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Ready to grow as a writer and build a consistent rhythm for your writing practice?
Join Now“I recently had the pleasure of working with Heather, and to say it was transformative would be an understatement.
"Heather’s expertise, guidance, and encouragement were what I needed to complete this project.Â
Recommended by a colleague, I did not know how essential my time with Heather would become. Her talent and genuine passion for guiding clients were evident from our first meeting. She was supportive and nurturing and her years of experience empowered me to explore my creativity and strive for excellence. Â
Thanks to Heather's mentorship, I've grown as a writer and feel confident in the path I have chosen. I wholeheartedly recommend Heather to help guide you through your writing journey.”
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Hi, I’m Heather Hartt-Sussman — a published picture book author and passionate writing coach.
I created the Prose Posse Picture Book Critique Group because I know firsthand how lonely and confusing the picture book writing process can be. For years, I struggled to break into publishing — and now, with eight books under my belt, I help writers skip the guesswork and finally finish the manuscripts they’ve been dreaming about.
This group isn’t just about getting one-off feedback. It’s about ongoing support, weekly accountability, and the creative momentum that comes from showing up consistently. In Prose Posse, you’ll write regularly, receive honest, constructive feedback, and grow alongside a welcoming community of picture book writers who get it.
Whether you’re stuck in revisions, unsure how to start, or just craving connection with fellow writers, I’m here to guide you every step of the way.
Ready to join us? Pull up a (virtual) chair — we’d love to have you.

What Makes This Picture Book Critique Group Different
✓ Specialized Picture Book Focus – This group is 100% dedicated to picture books — no novels, no poetry, just the unique craft of writing for children
✓ Supportive, Constructive Feedback – Receive honest, kind, and actionable critique in a growth-oriented space
 ✓ Live Weekly Sessions – Show up, write, and stay accountable with focused 60-90 minute Zoom calls
✓ Feedback That Reflects the Industry – Learn what agents, editors, and publishers look for in great picture books
✓ Sustainable Writing Practice – Build creative momentum and consistent habits
✓ Reignite Your Passion – Rediscover the joy of writing stories that matter to young readers

Is This Picture Book Critique Group Right for You?
This group is ideal for writers who are committed to growing their skills and improving their manuscripts. Whether you’re just getting started or have years of experience, you’ll benefit from thoughtful feedback, regular writing practice, and a like-minded community.
You don’t need to be published, just bring your love of picture books and a willingness to give and receive feedback.
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Enrollment is open for the Fall 2025 Prose Posse Picture Book Critique Group.
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